Review for felicia

The Anti-Valentines Day story:

To start, i definitely liked the idea of an "anti-valintines day." The idea alone grabed my interests and made me want to read the story. Like a few others have mentioned, i enjoyed the clash in personalities between Mellisa and Sara. It was neat to throw these two seemingly different entities together. Kinda like an Odd Couple sorta thing. The pace of the story was good. I followed everything with ease, and clarity for the most part. I did feel that the story didn't realy live up to what i originally thought it would. For it being about an anti-Valentines Day, the characters didn't really seem to be commiting to the idea. The ending left me desiring more. I think i would expand on the concept, and draw it out more. great idea though.