felicia's story
Felicia's story was about two friends going to anti-valentine party where no one can hook up. both charters just sat around "double fisting" drinks. nothing really happens only that one of the charters thinks "Kevin 's" hot.
Comments: I feel like it could use more details and a bit more action. in one part of the story cops came to the house and nothing happen other then they went in the house, maybe some more detail there or like someone got smart with the cop.

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