Tuesday Night Scribblers

Monday, April 02, 2007

The only way I can say this to you

To: Heather Wiegand
From: Jessica
Re: The only was I can say this to you

I like the opening part of the poem and the lines, "I'm back into your arms exactly where I wanna be, my heart lies in Dixie". This poem is similar to your past writings in that of the theme and style. I am not sure though of the layout here. You are happy to be back in this persons arms because this person knows you better than you know yourself. If the romance ended then it sort of conflicts. I understand that you are probably trying to say that you have broken up and now you are running back. Then again the poem does not state which person ran back to the other. If the romance ended why? If he was worth it of course.

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