To: Jessica

From: Heather

The first poem, Façade, reminded me of the line “Around you I am me” or something like that from the exercise we had to do one night for homework. Actually, I think that line came from one of your poems. I see a pattern developing. I’m not a fan of rhyming, but besides that your poems were enjoyable, short, and moderately concise. I think it would be interesting to write a poem in third person as opposed to first person, just a suggestion.