To: Matt

From: Heather

I liked these two poems, minus the rhyming, because the second one seemed to be a continuation of the first one, like they were written to be a pair or complement each other. Maybe they were…I don’t know. You use a lot of visual language and it is your use of words in general that makes your work a true pleasure to read. It interests me and I feel a lot of where I think you might be coming from with these. I am not a fan of rhyming, but I did not allow my distaste for words that sound like each other to take away from everything else. Well done, I say. Well done.