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To: Matt Forster
From: Jessica
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This poem seems to be a continuation of slip away. Basically talks about how the heart has been chattered but who is really to blame. I really sense a great deal of emotion trying to come through from this poem. It's as if you are at a loss of words. I enjoyed the lines, "my heart shatters, glass stained of longing, nestled in an ivory cage." The only suggestions I would have would be to elaborate on what it is you crave.