Review for Wynter:

"Eye of the Dragon"

When i first started reading, the first thing i noticed was the time you spent on detail, which is appreciated. I could tell you had really taken the time to think about the fine details that some might overlook. When Vahira spoke, it came as a surprise to me, and i was glad that you had decided to give the story more depth than a typical dragon slaying scenario. I love that you really gave the dragon character. Made the reader sympathize with her in some instances. She was more than just some giant, threatening beast. She had her own thoughts and feelings which added to the story very nicely. The only thing i was unsure about was the ending. It seemed a little rushed maybe. A little predictable. I would have liked to see Vahira maybe capture Alexander and at least torture him a little. It seemed to end too fast. Overall i really enjoyed this though. Some great word usage. Good structure. Everything came together very neatly.