Reviews for Sarah:
"Night: Starless"
I really enjoy reading your poetry. I find the word usage particularly alluring. Words such as "Night, Nip, Nubs." These are words you wont find in many poems. it gives your writing a unique flare. Something to make the reader remember it's yours. This poem reminded me of "A Midsummer Nights Dream" Just the dreamy vibe i get from it. Like you are lost in sleep, and free of all distractions. You paint a clear image of your own little world. A world where you are stumpy and proud.
"Not Afraid of Sharks"
I like the whole story you fit into this tight little poem. You were able to convey so much in just mere stanzas. The whole subject matter is intriguing here. are you truly afraid of dolphins??? Because of the story feel to it i wasn't sure whether this was a first person account, or just a story you conjured up in the form of prose. At any rate, i enjoyed it a great deal, and again like the over all structure you use. It helps eveything move very fluid like. I envy this perhaps because this is something i feel i lack in my own poetry. Awesome work.

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