Review for Jane:

"The Anniversary"

I enjoyed this story, and loved how you pulled it all together in the end. You did an excellent job of leaving the reader hanging on in anticipation as to what's going to happen. The descriptions you used were quite good, and gave me a nice mental image; however, i did find myself wanting more detail. Mainly in the beginning, where you introduce James and Geraldine, i wanted to know more about them. How did the meet? more info into their backgrounds would be nice. I wanted to know more about their relationship, and what exactly about it made it as special as it seems to be. Maybe a possibility could be to use some o the objects you describe as she is digging through the closet to go into some flash backs. Use those objects as a way to explore their relationship... Other than that, i think the story is pretty solid. Look forward to reading more from you.