I won't crash not this time

To: Heather Wiegand
From: Jessica
Re: I won't crash not this time

I would assume this poem is about the hopeful prospect of a nice guy. It seems as though you are trying to get across that this one makes you comfortable and is easy to talk to. You are in a struggle with yourself demonstrated by the line, "I will not lie I feel jaded" and "Jaded by life experience." I would try to elaborate more on the experience. Why are you "numb" when a nice one comes along? Why would it break you? I am unsure of the opening line "Loud exhaust not so loud boy". This doesnt seem to relate to the rest of the poem. Perhaps change the title by calling it simply Crash.