To Mike

From:Jen
I’ve never been a huge fan of science fiction, but I did actually enjoy this story. I liked how in beginning how you thought a father was really killing his son but it turns out he was dreaming. That really got me hooked on the story. As I kept reading the story, it kept me wanting to read and not put it down which is always a good thing. I thought the story was pretty original and I am interested to see what happens to Kibin in the future, if it continues. On a personal note, the physical description of Kibin reminds me of a really good friend of mine who is really into science fiction. And he also got blamed for something which made a lot of people turn on him so I liked that it reminded me of him. I also really liked the storm description in the beginning because I really love thunderstorms and lighting. I found that your story was very enjoyable.