Life

I loved this poem. I loved the message behind it. I tend to think negatively about life a lot and this poem reminds me life can be pretty good. I liked how the poem started off dark and depressing but gets lighter as it continues on. Like your other poem it catches the reader in beginning and is descriptive. There are two lines I really like from this poem. The first one is “Just the comfort of darkness to enfold me.” I thought it was a beautifully written line and enfold was a great word choice. I also liked the line “The intoxication of love”. I loved that line because I know when I first fall in love with someone new it is like being intoxicated. I wouldn’t change a thing about this poem.