Flight

I enjoyed reading this story. It has a nice flow to it and it kept me wanting to read more. I didn’t want to put it down. I thought “Flight” had very good descriptive language. I can get a good picture in my head of these two characters. The whole story itself was pretty descriptive. There were really creative lines in the story as well. “…but there was a certain note of disgust that sang between them, like two strings humming together on the same pitch. “ This line stood out to me, it was very clever. I can’t really think of much to change or to improve. I would like to know if Josephine could fly though.