Flight

To: Marybeth Mareski

From: Jessica

Re: Flight



This story is quite imaginative. It talks about a man and a woman who work together. One day they happen to meet through a door marked 'roof access'. On this roof they each share a bit of themselves such as Frederich who is a plant and needs sunlight and Josephine who has feathered wings. This story is basically a journey of discovery and challenge. It outlines Frederich's trying to get her to fly. You did a nice job describing the appearances (posture) of the characters. As for suggestions, I would like to have read a bit more about why the characters ended up with such interesting features. Also a little bit more about their personalities. Good story.