Horizon Bound

To: Heather Wiegand
From: Jessica
Re: Horizon Bound


Again I like the emotion this poem conveys, a somber yet renewing effect. Two of my favorite lines would have to be, "A broken heart behind the wheel" and "Keeping pirate eyes on the horizon". As for suggestiond perhaps take out a few "hers" and maybe a little bit more imagery. Try describing the surroundings...what this horizon looks like. The one line "hands gripping the stereo and steering wheel" needs to be changed. Overall though I like the idea.