When he stops the tears

To: Heather Wiegand
From: Jessica
Re: When he stops the tears

I like the emotion this poem displays. The feeling that you want to trust this person but are not sure. As if you are tempted but at the same time innocent. I like the line, " My eyes dark as the richest chocolate". As for suggestions perhaps a different title, maybe something the describes the emotion that is put through in the poem.