Tuesday Night Scribblers

Monday, February 26, 2007

"See No Evil"

I really liked this story. I thought the story was very creative. No where did I see that ending coming. It was hysterical. It had a good title too, “See No Evil”. I thought it was a good title considering Billy was blind and what his mother did. This story was also very nicely written, it flowed nicely and didn’t have a bunch of extra un-needed details. I honestly can’t think of anything I would change about it. Good job!

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