My Quest

I liked this poem a lot. I liked how you opened it with questions, it catches the readers attention. I like how you continue to use the questions throughout the poem. This poem can really make you think, I don’t how it couldn’t. It’s very descriptive so a reader could really feel the emotion behind the poem. “Where is the goddess of love? Who is the goddess of peace? What is the goddess of harmony? And why is there no goddess of happiness?” I really liked this stanza. I guess because I could relate to it. I think most people could. I can’t really think of anything I’d change.