The Intentions of the Intentional

I really like the way that this poem flows. Your choice of words and the structure was very interesting. The tone was sad, but the poem didn't make me feel sad. I felt cool in the hotspot, and I felt your desperation as you watched time float by. Sound striking, fast and fettered fools, Fat Domi Dot.Dot.Dot were some of my favorite word pairs. Very nice job on this poem.