Review For Trenise

Ode to Shelby is a fun poem to read and doesn’t take itself too seriously. The rhyme scheme also helps keep the poem light in tone. The poem is pretty straight forward with no real use of metaphor which is a good thing in this instance. My only complaint is that the rhyme scheme seems forced at some points, for instance forcing the rhyme between have and lag.
My Furry which I’m assuming should be My Fury has an excellent concept behind it that needs to be fleshed out more because it would make for a great poem. I really liked the last line of the poem, it reminds me of old Mississippi Delta blues music like Son House or Robert Johnson. I want to know more about the narrators anger though, I think the emotion is excellent but the problem is not quite fleshed out enough.