review3: trenise

The humor in ode to shelby is fun to read. Some phrases in the first few lines almost read as though you could be talking about a wild woman. It might be fun to rewrite this as if you're talking to a no-good woman, like a blues song "you're always running hot whan i want to play it cool, you took all my money, made me feel like a fool (guitar)". I can hear B.B. singing it now. I assume you meant "My Fury" not furry. Unless of course you were dating a Russian guy. They can be pretty furry. I like the line "you took my kindness for weakness". I'd like to know what this person did - the juicy details (for some reason I assume it's a guy). Tell us why you're mad so that we get mad too.