Review For April Meehan for " Bloomsday"

I really enjoyed reading your story! It made me want to read more about the character Murray and what he did in his life. I love how you described the dragons’ breath to the heat of the sun. The way you use your detail, I can picture this old guy wearing overalls. This was a cute little story and I would have loved to read more. But of course when you’re writing a short story, its short for a reason. Most authors create a story from an experience or a thought; what made you think of it?