Review for Trenise

(Ode to Shelby) This was an interesting piece to read. I never would have thought to use my car as a subject for writing. I like the way you went through your thought process and brought it naturally to a conclusion with your decision to keep the car. My one suggestion would be to be more careful of your spelling and word usage, for example, you used "lag" instead of "lack."

(My Furry) I really like the raw emotion of this poem. I particularly like the fourth line, "I am as mad as a cat . . . " My suggestion for this poem is the same as the last one. This would be a much more effective poem with the grammatical errors corrected. I would also like to suggest that you give a little more detail in this poem, perhaps letting us know specifically what incident caused you to feel this way.