Review For Trenise

ODE TO SHELBY

I really love how you are talking to your car as if it is a stubborn old lady or something. I know excactly how you feel , having a piece of crap car myself. Anyway this poem is alot of fun and very relatable. I think you should go back and fix "lag" to "lack"

My furry

You paint a nice portrait of how angry you are in this poem. "I am as mad as a cat " is my favorite line in the poem. I like the simplicirty of the lines, but i think elaboration and more specific details would only increase the poems meaning. Also, change furry to "fury"