Review for Jessica

(Inmate 321324) I like the way you try to describe what it's like for someone behind bars. I would like to suggest that you add some more detail, though. For example, why is this person in jail? What specific acts do the guards commit that are considered mental attacks? What does he stand for? How do they "stall on our time to mature?"

(Complete Me) I like the honesty of the struggle to do what's right in this poem. I also like that you address this issue to the Lord. Again, though, I would like to see some detail added to the piece. For example, What things have you had to bear? What cold and harsh things has man done unto you? What temptations have you faced, and did you succumb to any of them? In what way can the Lord complete you -- what specific things can He do to help you in your struggle?