Review for Jessica

Inmate 321324

I love this straight up, hold nothing back view of how minorities are treated in America's justice system. I love how you describe this man as, "Still naturally strong and hard core" he was born with a natural strength, that's a beautiful concept, to know that can't be changed. My favorite lines are,
"Don’t let them see you down and out nor your spirit equal to the floor
They hate to see a black man with something to stand for"
And i think "And it makes me sore that they have labeled my man inmate 321324" this really makes it personal. My only complaint is i want more!

Complete Me

I love the prayer like form here. the plead for help, it seems like this is the finale if something doesn't change. i really like "So I guess what I’m trying to say is I need you to complete me, right now, here" and how you reiderate that at the end and make it more important through space usage.
"Lord, I need you to complete me
Right now,
Here."