Review for Jessica

"Inmate 323214" provides a look into a relationship I am not too familar with, be it family, love, even friend in prison. I appriciate a glimpse into the unfamilar. "They stall on our time to mature", this line evokes the most emotion to me inthis poem, once again not being able to relate to not having my love close at hand, this provides me with a strong feeling of frustration and in a way dedication. I like how you show the impersonal state of the jail system by never revealing more than his imate number, what a great touch!

"Complete Me" was very interesting. While it is a short poem, I think it displays your devotion to your faith. "You said you are my helper and that I shouldn’t fear what man shall do unto me
But it is hard and the things they do are cold and harsh" provides a biblical tone that accompanies the subject very well.