To : Jane

From: Heather

Stories about two friends are always enjoyable to read and the experiences they encounter. I like how you take the time to elaborate upon each character and take the time to explain them as a person, not just characters in a story. The story was very laid-back and easy to follow, which I liked. The repetition of the word “remember,” “remembered,” and “remembers,” was intriguing, as I could now imagine the characters sitting on the front porch reminiscing about the “good ‘ol times.” The story tells about “the pond” during the different seasons of the year and I liked how the characters were the same, but everything around them changed.