Review for Felicia

The topics that you chose here are very deep and hit you in the heart. In Bright Red:
"The blood drops like the tears from her eyes.
If you look hard enough you can see the silver slit of fear in her eyes."

I love the descriptive details here.

I think that Thank You, describes a wonderful way to turn such a negative relationship, into positive qualities. I really like:
"Every time you told me I was worthless,
I found out I was priceless"

I like the use of these two words in comparision to one another.

In terms of what to do to improve the poems, i think that you have just touched the surface of the severity of the two topics. Try adding more depth to each "story". The reader can definately see the picture you're creating, but try making them really feel it.