Tuesday Night Scribblers

Monday, October 02, 2006

Review for Felicia

Bright Red:
I highly enjoy poems of taboo topics, they make for an interesting read. You consistantly use such strong words to convey the issue very well. Color for one is always most striking to me.
"The blood drops like the tears from her eyes." great similie. Here are a few questions that the poem left me with: Why was it such a bad day? What out of this bad day lead to the cutting, as opposed to other days? Who is the secret being kept from, and why?

Thank You:
The emotion in Thank You is great, the feeling of empowerment as opposed to a total woe is me take is GREAT, and I think should be explored more. "Every time you told me I was worthless,
I found out I was priceless.", really spoke to me, I think anyone could take this line and apply it somewhere in life, I think relatability is a difficult task to meet. When did you need the person the most? Give solid real examples of thier faults that eventually lead you to realize how great you are.

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