The World

To: Israel Loeb
From: Jessica
Re: The World

This poems was a personal look into the lightness and darkness of today's society. The cure/hope for change in this poem is love. I liked the ending in this poem, thought it summed it up nicely. "Emotion, that no longer make g-ds notes sing the blues, and perhaps, at last will turn, hell into heaven, sin into virtue, and dark into light". The only suggestions I would have is to describe the colors in the opening line. What colors come to mind that represent darkness? Also describe the woman's eyes. What do they look like turned dead?