Tuesday Night Scribblers

Friday, April 20, 2007

My Sons, My Daughters

To: Israel Loeb
From: Jessica
Re: My Sons, My Daughters

I really enjoyed this poem and thought it expressed a different side of you. This poem exudes a great deal of heartache and yearning. I really liked the second stanza, "Do you know that the earth walks with you, the sun shines for you...". Also liked" I wonder, do you truly believe, do you understand, hearts melt at the sight of you, the world turns in different directions, because of you". Very well written and my favorite thus far.

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