Loki

To: Jen Burghart
From: Jessica
Re: Loki

This poem is a definite improvement from your previous work. This poem provides us more of an insight into you as a person and writer. The suggestions I would have is the line, "it would be like this forever". What would be like this forever? Go into more detail with this point you are trying to make. Also the title. Not sure if it means low key or something else.