Schizophrenia

To: Charlie
From: Jessica
Re: Schizophrenia

Brief Description:
This is a story about a guy who works at a gym and his daily encounters with a janitor named Dan who is schizophrenic. According to the main character, he and Dan have been taking breaks together for 3yrs. He talks about their first encounter, Dan's love of pool, and the pool game with Dan and his brother Leroy. The main character lost at the pool game and seemingly upset Dan who hadn't talked the whole night. The main character is very close to Dan and shares everything with him.

Comments/Suggestions

I liked how this story plays out on a very personal level. Good details throughout though not sure of the main character's name. The story flowed well and the authors voice was pretty good.