Review for Wynter,

Monster:

This was definitely an interesting story. I started out thinking it was going in a totally different direction than it did. I like that it took such a dark turn at the end. You succeeded at creeping me out a bit. I liked the idea of the monster in the story, and thought the description of it was good. I have this image of it being like some kind of twisted, and evil looking Cheshire cat thing. Maybe one thing i would like more of is a little more of a back story into Mya and Ricky's relationship. I wanted to see more of why Ricky is so horrible. Why did he deserve to die? assuming he did. Without much insight into how abusive he was i found myself not really sympathizing with the little girl at all. Other than that i think this is great though.