Review for Jane,

Penny and Antonia:

This story was a nice departure from what i typically read. I actually kept thinking while reading it that you should totally write children's books. I think you have a great imagination, and are able to create characters that leave you wanting to know more about them. The ending, i think, could use a little work. I didn't really feel like it went anywhere. The story just kind of ended. I like the characters though. I think there is a lot you could do with them. You gave use some good description of scenery, and of both Penny and Antonia. In the end i just felt like i wanted more to happen. Maybe actually take them on adventures outside of the pond, and see what sort of trouble they can get into?