Trees

I thought this was a wonderful poem. It had so many great details that it brought the poem to life. I loved how you used personification to describe the trees. Two lines that show this well are “Scantily clad in spring, fingertips with jewels ready to burst. Normally people wouldn’t think of trees being scantily clad and having fingertips. Another line that shows great personification is “Flesh wrinkled with age and seasons, …” Once again must people wouldn’t think of trees as having flesh. I also thought this poem was beautifully written and had great descriptive detail.