"Seven Midget Strippers" by Felicia

This is a story about Sean and John's Friday night out on the
town at a strip club. The evening is meant to be fun but turns
sour at the end with John is approached by someone wanting
his wallet. His hand is cut and he must go to the hospital.


The story setting is obvious and in place. I felt the opening paragraph
is a good one and nicely starts the story that takes place.
There seems to be much detail throughout the story; such as,
"A few minutes later he grabbed a water bottle and went to finish
getting ready." and "the smoke found a way into their eyes, etc. etc.
It almost seems to me that that event could have taken place.