Review for Derek Salisbury "Temptation has a Beautiful Face, Scrubbing a Hardwood Floor"

"Temptation has a Beautiful Face" is a wonderful poem! I love how you described this
woman to be the women of your dreams and possibly your nightmares too. By reading
this poem I couldn’t get the move "Sin City" out of my head....The poem is dark and
sexy. A very good combo I might add! I also love how you Compared I believe your love
for her. "We were heavy metal rock n' roll with a harpsichord, slow mellow jazz
accompanied by screaming violins" In the poem "Scrubbing a Hardwood Floor", I can
picture two lovers dancing on a hardwood floor as the bleed together in each others
arms...kinda gory but also sweet in a way. I really like how you repeated the words "it's
so fragile" as if there last moments were fragile....as I think it is...I like how your very
descriptive in your details in the poem; because of that I can picture all of this taking
place in front of me....I really cant think of anything else to add for you to improve
yourself...The poems were great!