Review for Dawn Kaufman "Egypt Rising"

I really did enjoy reading this short story. As soon as I started reading, I couldn’t put it
down. By you using your great details explaining the sensory details and other details, I
was able to picture myself as Sandra exposing a lost treasure! I love how you also put in
the beginning of your short story a lil expert of what might be the rest chapter of your
book if this was to become a book or if you were to add more to the story. To be honest
I cant really think of anything that you could have done to make this a better short
story....I’m trying to think but nothing comes to mind. I think you did a great job!