Review for Sarah Dillon "Homeward Bound, Philo 101"

The Poem "Homeward Bound" is a cute poem! I like how you compared the pros and
cons of good ole Baltimore City. I am a fan of rhyming poetry so I love how your poem
rhymed. You did t well! By your title of the poem, it makes me think that you are
returning to Baltimore because you have left it...how did you come up with your title? I'm
not sure if D.O.B's is said as dobs or do you say it as D.O.B, but either way you make it
work within your poem and that shows originally. For the second poem "Philo 101", from
what I received from the poem itself was that you have this philosophy class which you
really don’t like because you’re trying to "shoot a smile". I like how you clearly put your
opinion of the class in your poem. The only thing that I can think is too possible make the
poem longer by putting more info about that class and what else are you forcing yourself
to do like "shooting a smile".