review 1: Derek Salisbury

The many specific details and tangible images in your poetry, such as, "she dried my sweaty face", "ginger pink tongue", "stained hardwood floor", and "screaming violins" really submerge the reader in that world. Sometimes I wondered whether your word choice could be more precise. For example, in Temptation has a Beautiful Face (which is a great title), I wonder what you mean by "her whispering report".