Seven Midget Strippers

I liked this story a lot, it made me laugh out loud. The part with a waitress from Dundalk was hysterical to me. My grandfather lived in Dundalk, one of my best friend’s live in Dundalk, my boyfriend is from Dundalk, so I know Dundalk well. So those lines describing the waitress are great. I like the little details like the cigarettes Sean are smoking are Marlboros, you didn’t just say he was smoking cigarettes. I also like how in the end you implied that they go out every Friday night. The whole story just reminded me of my friends and I on Friday night. Usually every time something crazy happens and we do it all again next week. There isn’t really anything I can think of that would make this story better.