Mike,

I Think the ‘Run Like Hell’ Was Implied

I thought this was really well written, and it kept my attention from start to finish (which isn't an easy task.) The descriptions you use for your characters and for their surroundings are so vivid. I had a clear mental image of what was happening in the story, in my head the whole time. It had so many different levels. It was funny at times, and it was dramatic at times. The time frame that this took place in was made clear. You made the characters seem accessible. I'm not even sure of any suggestion I could give to you. I think you delivered a story that you obviously took time to nurture and craft. My only advice is to keep on writing.

-Matt