Review for Bloomsday

April did an excellent job of description in her story, "bricks and mortar wept tears of perspiration in the hot sun. Keeping vigil, tall buildings hovered like wings" stuck out. The entire story flowed extremely well especially through the time changes from current to past and back again. Also the local dialect was very well done. In the story I wanted to know the character of Murray Bloom better, even though he's the main character we know almost nothing about him. All the characters mentioned in the story have a great deal of potential and with April's writing and a little more length to the story would easily become less two dimensional.